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Imagine
Contributed by
BEBE
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Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 12:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Imagine a life full of reached dreams
A life without dissappointments!
Its complex huh?
Imagine a life full of love
a life that doesnt contain pain or death.
Full of wanders and painless desires.
Imagine...
Ok! Back to reality!
Im tired of dreaming..
You look around this reckless society,
Death everywhere
Pain and suicide.
People cant take the pressure of the world.
They give up hope.
Suicide rates keep rising.
and the rate of depression is going up daily.
Is it ever going to stop?
Can we ever be "normal" Whatever this even means!
You have people always wishing for something. anything better
but when they reached that theyre still not satisfied. .. wanting more
a continous search for something they are never going to find!
I guess I can dream.
But dreaming for something that is never going to happen,
seems pointless and a waste of my tyme.
I guess that is what dreams are made of,
A set up for a bunch of let downs and dissapointments.
hmmmm, just imagine
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BEBE
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2005-11-26 12:48:09]
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Re: Imagine
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:23:56 PM AEST
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| Very good write exposing the human condition, because of the sin of rebellion against God. Some choose to blame God, or deny His existance. It don't change the condition - does it? |
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Re: Imagine
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by Patti on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:40:36 PM AEST
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I like this write just because is very true. Some people just based things on what will happen in the fute before they can deal with the present. good job
patti |
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Re: Imagine
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by dark_fighter_chick on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 05:37:04 PM AEST
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| i guess thats why we need more people how arn't selfish and rude and to give a helping hand for thoes in need. so, maybe, put your words into action and maybe ur poem will be the end of depression and the other things your complaining about. |
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Re: Imagine
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by Kamal on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 12:18:33 PM AEST
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YO dreams are visons sometimes past occurences or present, but its the prophetic vison thats confusing because all you imagine is coming from where?
Contrary to your expression!
Big up to dreams..!!
Good write
God Blessed one |
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