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She had no face
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 03:06:28 AM in AEST
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to him she had nothing
not even a face
there with her
he had no place
nothing to lose
no where to go
broken hopes and pain
the only thing she knows
her heart is broken
she''s torn in two
with all the memories
flooding back of you
she walks in the room
whispers in the air
of the one person
you thought once cared
but he didn''t care
he didn''t care at all
he never helped her pull together
after a long hard fall
and on his heart
she left no trace
because to him
she had no face
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Re: She had no face
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by orgygirl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 10:14:22 PM AEST
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| This was very well written and straight to the point. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep 'em coming! |
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Re: She had no face
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by orgygirl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 10:14:31 PM AEST
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| This was very well written and straight to the point. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep 'em coming! |
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Re: She had no face
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 02:55:06 PM AEST
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| beautiful write, very sad, i've been there before. keep up the good work, this was a really good poem. |
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