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never lemme go_ x3
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 10:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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hold me close and never lemme go . . .
grasp my hand and kiss me lightly. . .
make it so i never want us to part . . .
call me ever night just to make sure im ok . . .
look into my eyes like im the only person in the world . . .
hold me tightly when i cry . . .
call me beautiful even when i look horrible . . .
wipe the tears from my eyes . . .
dedicate songs to me . . .
always understand me . . .
volunteer to meet my parents . . .
and introduce me to your mom . . .
watch movies with me by your side . . .
make it so everythings better when your there . . .
keep your promises . . .
hold my hand along the beach . . .
kiss me when no ones around . . .
and most importantly . . .
never lemme go . . . .
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2005-11-25 22:41:50]
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Re: never lemme go_ x3
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 10:47:04 PM AEST
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| for the ellipses, i see no point in their existence for this piece. if they are used every once in a while they can have an impact and be effective, but with using them like this they are like periods, just there. i think they are a hindrance to a reader also, when their focus keeps catching them, like my eyes did. |
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Re: never lemme go_ x3
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by BEBE on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 10:56:10 PM AEST
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I agree with the other comment, But over all, this is what id love for a man to do
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Re: never lemme go_ x3
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by orgygirl on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 11:44:59 PM AEST
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| Hi! I just wanted to say this poem is very sweet and I could feel the love that went into it. I think this is how every woman would like her man to treat her. I hope this was a true story and a happy ending for you. |
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Re: never lemme go_ x3
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:08:36 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful easy to read and understand, straight from the heart poetry, if this guy don't fall in love with u somthing's wrong, nice style u have, my guess is your in your teens, i say that cause your wording is very pragmatic and mature sounding, lovely writting.
Ben |
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