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Heavenly Dreamer
Contributed by
Kano
on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:55:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I will tell you a story, of a celestial distant land
With endless waters of blue, and subtle golden sand
An essence lingers on the breeze, that soothes all dismay
An overwhelming sense of calm, without a rainy day
There is no need for money, and no one locks their door
Greed and hate are words of old, spoken here no more
The only battle for a piece of land, is between the sand and waves
Beautiful rhythmic sapphire crests, softly carry it away
Anyone can come to visit, welcome to stay as long as desired
It is second to only heaven, it is a place that I admire
If you seek this tranquil land, I assure you it won't be hard to find
It lies dormant and waiting for a visit, in every persons mind
Copyright ©
Kano
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2005-11-25 13:55:06]
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Re: Heavenly Dreamer
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 08:46:50 PM AEST
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Oh yeah... this is awesome. It is true... your mind is that place... but isn't it sad that it is really the only place. There is no physical place that contains beauty like in your poem. Well, great write...
Jodi |
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Re: Heavenly Dreamer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 09:37:52 AM AEST
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I think there are some physical places like this aswell. There just slowly deteriorating. I know when I need to get away I sit at the beach, it's like an outlet. A very kind and gentle poem kano, an absolute pleasure to read, I've missed your work. It's glad to see you're back and writing again.
-Cassy |
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Re: Heavenly Dreamer
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:29:04 AM AEST
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| Thats beautiful, I have visited there when I cant sleep at night, it helps to take your mind of worrys and fall asleep.. xx |
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