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Growth
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 04:25:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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fresh and new
a love can feel so true
butterflies on the first date
you just can't wait
comfortable and secure
dissipating fears
it's been two years
you just want them near
things start to fall apart
they break your heart
the world crashes down
everything's turned around
you soul search and find
you can't get them off your mind
they're never far
in the end there they are
now older and wiser
you've found each other
the love you shared
it was always there
life has changed you
everything's so new
now comfortable and secure
you're looking to the future
can't wait to see what's in store
and what's behind life's next door
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
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2005-11-25 04:25:36]
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Re: Growth
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:30:07 PM AEST
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Oh My you are very talented indeed! The slow progression of smooth words, your rhymn was wonderful, and best of all your poetry story was fantastic, your reader can relax, and not have to guess what it is you have to say.
I really enjoyed this, and it's true also, mature love is always the best!
Warm love
consue
And isn't it wonderful that we don't know what it going to happen next? Keeps our lives filled with anticipation and variety, which is of course, the "Spice of Life!" |
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Re: Growth
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by tears_of_blood on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 08:04:51 PM AEST
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hey i love this poem tasia its so good makes me feel happy to read it we have had alot to go through just happy that we are still there for one a nothere.
brad oxoxo
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