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Against all Odds
Contributed by
ruby_dreamer
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Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 02:33:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Of emerald trees
And winter breeze
How sweet the snowflakes fly
Those tiny tears of crystal lace
That watch the world go by
The only way to go is up
But they can only fall
Of winter dreams
And moonlight beams
A snowflake rises tall.
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2005-11-25 02:33:42]
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Re: Against all Odds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 02:47:34 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem. Absolutely beautiful reminds me of my childhood when my worries were few. How I loved watching the snow fall and playing out while it snowed with my little brother in the front yard. That was a long time ago though :( when mother and stepfather were still together. |
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Re: Against all Odds
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by Dandy on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 11:37:57 AM AEST
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| lovely poem.....made me pause for thought in a another mad day |
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Re: Against all Odds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:27:53 PM AEST
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A very nice poem of hopes & dreams. Enjoyed it very much. I loved the metaphor at the end of a snowflake rising tall.
Short & sweet.
Thank you for sharing,
Tim
:-)
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Re: Against all Odds
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 11:38:16 AM AEST
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| Penned so elegantly. So very beautiful. The whole piece is a work of art. Much peace to you, Laura |
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