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Broken Down
Contributed by
drmbeliever
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Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:59:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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You are trying so hard to beat me around
You have continuously thrown me
been falling and crawiling on the ground
when will the day come that you see
You can no longer manipulate me
I am breaking into pieces
I am falling apart
you have taken everything
you have broken my heart
how can you call yourself my mom
when all you have done is become a con
you are hurting eveyone, dont you see?
I think you are losing it, well losing me
im done with the hurt, im done with the pain
maybe someday these tears wont fall like the rain
you see, i do care....unconditionally
but i cant if you keep hurting me
i try and i try but there is no moving on
you keep tugging at me like i am a dog
i am suppose to do everything that you like
But when it comes to me, it is my life!!
There is no longer time to live through me,
cause like i have said before,
i am not the angel you wanted me to be
so here i go and i hope you see, I am ME
either you love me unconditionally,
or you arent going to love me.
Copyright ©
drmbeliever
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2005-11-24 22:59:06]
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Re: Broken Down
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by Zanobia on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:17:35 PM AEST
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| wow. that waws real and touching. it brough me back to reality thank you |
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Re: Broken Down
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:23:42 PM AEST
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Alot of unresolved issues between u and ur mother. A deep, sad and very well detailed write. I hope u 2 can sort things out. I wish u 2 all the best. Otherwise an emotional and touching write. Thanks for sharing.
*hugs*
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Re: Broken Down
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:26:33 AM AEST
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alot of pain here, i know how it goes, you will get stronger eventually and it wont bother you so much just hang in there.
SM |
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