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Dead forever
Contributed by
deathbringer
on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 09:49:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When will come my turn to die?
I want it now , far from here to fly.
At my grave don't shed a tear , don't cry
Be brave , stand tall , look high...
Never be sad 'bout my passing away
I'll be there for you , in dreams , if i may,
Remember me in the darkest of hours
Remember us when the world used to be ours.
No!Don't think of me!Forget me!
In my suffering Hell let me be
Forget about the past we had together,
I'm too dead now . dead forever
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deathbringer
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2005-11-24 21:49:48]
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Re: Dead forever
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by Zanobia on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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| no, that seemed very suicidal to me. well it was really strong and brought me through the pain and suffring. wow. i dont know what else to say. thank you |
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Re: Dead forever
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by pondering_poetess on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:16:03 PM AEST
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| Definitely raw emotion. It brings the reader through the pain and suffering of the writer. However, I did not feel it was suicidal so much as regretful and filled with a new and blinding pain. |
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Re: Dead forever
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:21:26 PM AEST
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| All i can do as a writer is to make the reader feel my emotions , make him/her feel all the pain in my head . If I can't make the reader feel my emotions it means i'm not a good writer but I really don't care.Everybody makes it what they think of it. |
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Re: Dead forever
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by pondering_poetess on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:34:30 PM AEST
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| I didn't mean it as an insult in any way. I meant that it is a great write because of the fact that your words do bring the depth of the emotion to the reader. It takes a great deal of courage to express your inner thoughts. I admire that courage. |
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Re: Dead forever
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:00:27 PM AEST
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| courage???funny ....i always thought that courage is fear with different clothing but that's not the reason i wrote this poem or any other.I wrote it becouse i just don't care anymore.I've been thru lots in my life and it's not worth to b afraid to express yourself.And i wasn't offended.thanx for the review. |
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