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silent
Contributed by
moon_light
on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 08:48:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Standing here
my heart pounds.
it's hard to breath.
passion's wearing thin.
anticipation
floating thick in the air.
ringing in my ears.
time ticking merrily away.
leaving me here with
nothing to say.
i tried to tell you before.
words struggling
fighting to be free.
my heart refusing
to show what's inside.
my arms seek you.
hoping for your embrace.
tears running down my face.
i open my mouth
nothing comes out.
colors spinning around.
all alone
watching the stars.
i scream.
free they come
until you return.
then they will hide again
in frustration
please excuse my spelling
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moon_light
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2005-11-24 20:48:21]
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Re: silent
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by Zanobia on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 09:39:06 PM AEST
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| htat was great. |
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Re: silent
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:47:36 AM AEST
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| besides the spelling; good write. Know this feeling very well. Hope that those words are able to come out soon Thanks for sharing |
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Re: silent
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 12:52:38 AM AEST
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this is a good write jenn a very good write bye
DEMON |
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Re: silent
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by gah_veh on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 04:48:33 PM AEST
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| nice one liked it alot write me sometime g2g |
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