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Shadows and Silhouettes
Contributed by
pondering_poetess
on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 08:23:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness descends creating shadows and silhouettes
Draping worn souls in past losses and haunting regrets
Frigid autumn air teases with remnants of memories
Icy wind whistles melody of forgotten pleas
Daylight surrenders to its inevitable end
Leaving times sinners alone to deny or defend
Dancing oak trees stripped bare by winter’s impatient hand
Remind that the hourglass continues to spill its sand
Dry crisp leaves rustle across dead grass darkened by night
November clouds diminish crescent moons shining light
Splashed haphazardly, twinkling stars grace blackening skies
Waiting to be captured and placed in hopeless lover’s eyes
All the day’s color washed from earth as evening grows bold
Stories illuminated by light remain untold
Fate steps forward boldly to collect passing day’s debts
Judgment finds comfort amongst shadows and silhouettes
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2005-11-24 20:23:10]
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Re: Shadows and Silhouettes
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 09:06:51 PM AEST
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| beautiful work. i loved it. |
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Re: Shadows and Silhouettes
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:02:08 PM AEST
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A remarkable piece of poetry captured so well.
The flow and rhyming absolutely magnificent.
An outstanding write that captivates the reader from start to finish. Thank you for sharing your brilliant poetic art with us.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Shadows and Silhouettes
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:10:33 PM AEST
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| This is art in it's rightful meaning.this is the beauty of the words.damn .. i'm speachless.looking forward to read your next poems. |
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