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Started From Tears
Contributed by
LilBabe
on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tears fall from red eyes
With smeared mascara
And blushing cheeks
Trembling hands,
Heavy breathing,
A strong wave of emotion
But there's something you see
Behind all of this,
Behind my soobing eyes,
Ruined make-up,
And frazzled hair
You hold me tight
Against your body
I just relax
And listen to your heart beat
You tell me it's okay
And rock me slowly
Back and forth
You see past my looks,
Into my soul
Suddenly everything seems alright
Our eyes meet
Then we lean in
For true love's first kiss
You brush my hair back with your hand
And whispher, "I love you"
It all started from tears...
Copyright ©
LilBabe
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2005-11-24 15:20:04]
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Re: Started From Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 04:01:14 PM AEST
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| thats a very sweet poem, its simple and straight to the point. Plus your style of writing flowed very well. well done |
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Re: Started From Tears
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:16:26 PM AEST
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Great piece! And i agree totally that it flowed wonderfully
from beginning to end.
Especially since... it all started from tears.
keep up the excellent writing! |
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Re: Started From Tears
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by Kano on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:25:47 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Thank you for sharing it with us |
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