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Great new day
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 02:03:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Yellow skies and bright eyes
Turning off the black black nights
Now the skies have turned to gray
And now I'm hear to say
It's going to be a great new day
(But for some the same)
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Re: Great new day
(User Rating: 1 ) by the_wampum_pimp on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 08:22:36 AM AEST (User
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this was an interesting read |
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Re: Great new day
(User Rating: 1 ) by soad811 on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 07:50:57 PM AEST (User
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i like your rhyme scheme, its eccentric
A, B, C, C, C
very orignal! |
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