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Betrayal
Contributed by
Without_Hope
on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 01:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once seperate pieces fall together,
An awfull picture is what I see,
As the colors are finaly defined,
The scene it shows I wish to flee.
A reunion that should have been cherished,
brings the pain of a bond that perished.
Friendship is torn, ripped apart,
At seams that had held for so long,
And weakness shows between the cracks,
Of a man I had thought was so strong.
Betrayal rears its ugly face,
And I know I will lose this race.
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Without_Hope
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2005-11-24 01:46:08]
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Re: Betrayal
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by mindless-wish on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 01:56:12 AM AEST
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| nice wording..... you say what i wish i could |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:28:09 PM AEST
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| No you won't place back the pieces, that make one picture whole.. if you want to know how, go directly to the Lord. Raquel Leah |
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