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Imagined Vacation
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 10:34:23 PM in AEST
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Well it happened to be
That on this day
Jarred popped over
He wanted to play
Now the game on his mind
Was one I found strange
And despite my fears
His mind would not change
Next thing I knew
I was up in the air
To look over the edge
I did not dare
Within the balloon
I was up so high
And I couldn't help
But heave a sigh
For as I clunng
To the basket floor
All I could dream up
Was touching ground once more
Then our Irish friend
Whom we all adore
Started talking of states
With ranches galore
And this image so lovely
Got stuck in my head
Of an Irish cowboy
One named Jarred
So with a giggle
I returned to the ground
And suddenly realized
The courage I'd found
So thanks to our
Imaginations
I'm finally ready
For an airborn vacation
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-11-23 22:34:23]
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Re: Imagined Vacation
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:35:33 AM AEST
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Now that was a very very nice poem, Kiela. That crazy Jarred, though scaring you like that. Just kidding Jarred. Glad it had a happy ending and all worked out for the best.
I'd have to say very briiliant imagery because you had me right there with you clingy onto the basket floor. Awesome flight, Kiela.
Thank you for sharing this.
Tim
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Re: Imagined Vacation
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:25:52 PM AEST
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| fun filled write just what the doctor ordered thanks for the smile..Eddy |
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Re: Imagined Vacation
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 01:50:44 PM AEST
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Good work friend.
Don't know how I missed this one.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Imagined Vacation
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 03:58:39 PM AEST
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| Love it. Brought a smile to my ol' face. :) |
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