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Goodbye
Contributed by
krys
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:34:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The last touch led to the last kiss
I'm suffering.
The last words led to the last glance
I'm loosing my mind
The last bit of trust led to the last broken heart
It's hard to go on
The last tear rolling down my cheek led to the last letter
I'm hurting
The last new day led to the last good night and with the last breath I take…….
I take my life.
Copyright ©
krys
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2005-11-23 21:34:40]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:41:06 PM AEST
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awwwwwww so sad.. I hope this isn't true
about you thinking about taking your life..
nice write...
take care... |
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Re: Goodbye
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:59:07 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem and you wrote it in such a beautiful way,
Godbless
BeBE |
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Re: Goodbye
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by mindless-wish on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 02:21:24 AM AEST
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| you make this poem gracefull. very good writting |
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