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Teardrops
Contributed by
Zanobia
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:06:28 PM in AEST
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Teardrops falling from my eyes,
Raindrops dancing from the sky,
Both falling towards the land,
Down to a man,
Who see the sorrow and despair,
And takes from the hostile air,
A sliver of a sun's ray,
Going out of his way,
To give it to me,
So that someday I may be,
Happy and carefree,
And when he hands me the piece of joy,
I realize what he has done, he has given me a toy,to play with
to use to change my life with,
And the teardrops stop falling from my eyes,
And the raindrops stop dancing down from the sky.
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Zanobia
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2005-11-23 20:06:28]
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Re: Teardrops
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:08:33 PM AEST
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| WOW ... VERY NICE.. |
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Re: Teardrops
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by trini on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:09:04 PM AEST
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aw. i liked this. it was very different then alot of the poems i read. keep up the good work
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Re: Teardrops
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 10:16:28 PM AEST
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This is very cute!!
GODBLESS
BEBE |
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Re: Teardrops
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by Zanobia on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 04:19:31 PM AEST
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thank you. it is alot more happy than alot of my other poems. but alot of mine reflect my emotions so yea. thank you. i hope you enjoy all of my poems.
-zanobia |
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Re: Teardrops
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:03:55 PM AEST
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it's good to read something 'bout happyness from time to time
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Re: Teardrops
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by Zanobia on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:14:29 PM AEST
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| i agree |
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