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Seconds Til' Death
Contributed by
tortured_soul
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:43:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The icy breath of death,
Is just around the corner.
I feel it.
I hear it calling me,
Whispering to me.
Will my spirit rest in peace,
Or will my dead corpse just whither away,
like my loved one’s sorrow?
But this voice,
Of death,
It calls me,
And now it shall take me.
To where?
I do not know.
But I’m going,
Whether I like it or not.
I blink my eyes one last time.
And now I’m gone forever,
Into the blinding darkness.
Falling,
Falling,
Into Satan’s arms.
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2005-11-23 17:43:25]
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Re: Seconds Til' Death
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 07:24:18 PM AEST
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| This Poem is beautiful. It presents a escape from the pain in the real world. The easy way out, and the quick end to all the pain life has to offer great poem, Keep writing.. And ill remembert to keep reading your stuff, based on this poem... P.s Your not alone bro, there are so many people who suffered from life... and from the death of other... although sometimes wefeel alone, Im sorry about your aunt's death... I have lost so many people dear to me, sometimes I feel so alone.. Nice poem mate keep writing |
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Re: Seconds Til' Death
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:48:17 PM AEST
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This poem is so beautiful.. sorry to hear about
your aunt's death. |
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Re: Seconds Til' Death
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:45:26 PM AEST
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great poem
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