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u h8 me
Contributed by
theimaginationofluke
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:38:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the one i love makes me cry,
the one i need is so fun,
but the one can be harsh,
can be mean,
BUT ILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU,
you hated me in the past,
and u h8 me in the presant,
BUT I DO LOVE YOU
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2005-11-23 17:38:20]
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Re: u h8 me
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by theimaginationofluke on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:44:48 PM AEST
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| its J |
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Re: u h8 me
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by tortured_soul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:46:17 PM AEST
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| 8/10 good job! Very emotional and I feel empathy towards you. |
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Re: u h8 me
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 07:12:41 PM AEST
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| apart from the fact i'm drunk, even if i was sobber, I'd say your being harsh on yourself your poems not bad, its a little ruff round the edges but is extremely emotive, and im sure you have the potential to be a great poet, nice job |
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Re: u h8 me
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 09:05:08 AM AEST
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its short, but sweet.
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Re: u h8 me
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 07:10:51 AM AEST
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| is it JEMER?!?!?! |
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