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Questioning my heart?
Contributed by
JenJen
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Too many tears have left my eyes
Too much i cannot forget
It's time to say my Goodbyes
Trying not to be too upset.
There could be a chance
It could all recover
Or could this be our last dance?
In our relationship there is nothing left to discover. . .
To be continued
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-11-23 16:26:03]
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Re: Questioning my heart?
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:13:13 PM AEST
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| Good poem Jen sad but good. I wish you the best and I hope that things get better. |
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Re: Questioning my heart?
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:54:08 PM AEST
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nice short but sad write i hope things get better for you i will wait for part 2
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Re: Questioning my heart?
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by AnastasiaN on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:27:36 PM AEST
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| great write take care |
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