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What life holds
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 12:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Lightning lights a thunderous sky,
rain drips like a tender kiss on my lips,
with a shock life's story unfolds,
like a chill down my spine,
like a hill there are ups and downs,
rivers flow strong, others run dry,
sun evaporates tears through the years,
forgive and forget, all that we have left.
Like a sonnet sung and a wedding bell sings
of things to come and what life brings,
gifts of passion and dedication
accompanied with fears and desperation.
Misery a mystery, life a hypocracy,
dreaming of a better tomorrow
yet the dry scorched earth bleeds
with sorrow and tears, pain and fears,
focusing on tomorrow too much
making you forget today.
Silence speaking softening words,
about things and people and reminnisence of the past,
living today with peace at last.
But we know before the deathbell tolls
and the boulders from mountaintop rolls,
there is no peace that lasts,
a mere phase till the lightning strikes
and forests take flame,
making it through, step by step,
each day.
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2005-11-23 12:01:12]
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Re: What life holds
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by Shade on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 02:54:04 PM AEST
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Great job on this poem. I love the wording and flow. It captures beautifully the vibrancy of life.
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Re: What life holds
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 07:05:35 PM AEST
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interesting write interesting flow
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Re: What life holds
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Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:31:49 AM AEST
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Very well done, great write! Loved the words you used, but what else can you expect from someone like you?
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