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My Precious Treasure
Contributed by
WAE
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:48:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I held the precios stone
Of your unerthy beauty
In my hardened hand
That extended
Towards the rising Sun.
I couldn't breath,
I froze in silent admiration;
The magic fusion
Of the shining, emerald green gem
And blinding yellow of the dawn
Seized my mind and will.
Green, the color of the eternal hope,
And the royal, nobel yellow of the young star
Mixed with each other
Like love and faith
Walk hand in hand
In the hearts of lovers.
This picture enchanted me forever,
And since that morning,
I carry you, my only treasure,
Embedded in the most sacred frame,
My loving heart.
Copyright ©
WAE
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2005-11-23 11:48:08]
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Re: My Precious Treasure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 12:04:46 PM AEST
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Simply divine! Except for a few spelling errors this poem wreaked of beauty!
The flow was nice, and the words were mesmerizing. Very well done!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: My Precious Treasure
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:10:06 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! |
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