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Unforgiving Eyes
Contributed by
Kano
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:50:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Twenty-four years and not a lesson learned
I clutch the match until it begins to burn
Searching for love in a shallow place
Ignoring the heart and fixed on the face
Many of their memories linger in my mind
An ocean of beauty that I have left behind
And even though it was blissful at first
It wasn't enough to quench my thirst
I am called a player by the untrained eye
But I do not cheat and I never lie
I have broken some hearts and this I know
Why should I stay when love has no place to go
I look for my soul mate with unforgiving eyes
Not allowing the chance to reveal what's inside
I search too fast and I will probably fail to see
The most beautiful woman that is meant for me
Copyright ©
Kano
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2005-11-23 04:50:11]
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:25:57 AM AEST
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| Love this poem well done, brilliant. |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by brew on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:03:27 AM AEST
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Great and beautiful write, NOW where in the HECK have you been?! By this write, I CAN see............*just shakes* head! You dont learn , do you?!?!?! The write, was heartful........and Im sorry, if it was a flop.! Good to see a post from you finally.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:15:16 AM AEST
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| lol, geesh ignore the computer for a month or so and look what happens, I get in trouble. |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by blondie_64865 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:23:19 PM AEST
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| so true! It's amazing how fast people are to pass judgement and see only one side of the triangle. Very good write. |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:17:35 AM AEST
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lol I think it's been a bit longer then a month, just disappear eh? Very nice of you. Amazing write though, heartfelt, honest. I guess a lot of people are like this, always looking for that perfect person, that never seems to appear, then when they do, you don't see them. Love the write, hopefully you won't vanish again and we'll get to see more =D lol. Nice to see you back.
-Cassy |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 02:49:58 AM AEST
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nice flow nice concept well done in al aspects . . .
Ben |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:06:46 AM AEST
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Excellent write...I really enjoyed it..
Happy Thanksgiving.
Jeff |
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Re: Unforgiving Eyes
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by sride686 on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:23:21 AM AEST
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A VERY GOOD WRITE MY FRIEND AND I THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT ON MINE. LOVE TAKES TIME AND M OST OF THE TIME IT FEELS LIKE YOU WILL NEVER FIND YOUR LOVE AND THEN OTHER TIMES
IT FEELS LIKE YOU’VE LOST YOUR
LOVE BUT LOVE IS OUT THERE AND It
WILL FIND YOU IF YOU WANT IT TO.
VERY WELL DONE ON THIS WRITE IT
FLOWS VERY SMOOTH AND IT GETS
THE EMOTIONS AND MEAN OF THE
WORDS BY WITHOUT ANY EFFORT BY
THE READER TO INTERPRET. TAKE
CARE AND KEEP UP THE
WRITES….STEVE |
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