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Futures Time
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:31:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Unabated silence streaks
across the night sky,
Shadows flow through
my minds eye.
Life is golden
in silver streams.
Strong desires show
when we're a team,
In your eyes I see
a gleem of our hopes and dreams.
Copyright ©
darkkai
... [
2005-11-23 01:31:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Futures Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:01:26 AM AEST (User
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I dont see anything wrong on Your poem...in fact its very well written...I think You only wrote what's inside Yourself :)
I enjoyed the reading...good work!
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