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pulling my strings
Contributed by
confusedclockwork
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 12:03:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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ive got a monster who lives in my head id let him out but hed kill all my thoughts dead, and ive got a demon who governs my feet she makes me walk around all night so i cant sleep ,and ive got choices that i can make but its hard to decide when your will lacks strength and ive a problem that hangs like a weight to go on with my life or sit here and wait?never again will i live such a fate i decide here and now a choice i shall make.
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Re: pulling my strings
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by Val-Hundra on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:59:50 PM AEST
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| Don't let your inner demons control you as if you were a marionette. Rise up and cut your strings. Live your life by your own choices and don't let the words of others bend you against yourself. |
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Re: pulling my strings
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:24:58 AM AEST
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| I thought this a great write man. I liked this line in particular....I've got a demon who governs my feet she makes me walk around all night so i can't sleep...woman messing with your mind, perhaps? Keep writing...you've caught my interest. Peace to you, Laura |
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