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Put you're self in my place
Contributed by
MissCin87
on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:15:56 PM in AEST
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I’m going to ask you to do something crazy
Put yourself in my shoes for a minute,
At the tender age of twelve, your whole life changes
No more fun and games, instead Doctors, treatments, and shots.
Being told walking may never happen again.
How does it feel…?
Thirteenth Birthday, spent in the hospital.
A year and a half spent in a rehab center
Accomplishment after accomplishment has been made,
Finally something is going your way!
Walking sure feels GREAT!
A few years down the road, your Seventeen now,
And you just found out more medical problems have come your way,
After all the years of suffering
You thought you were out of the clear
Well, guess again my dear.
More roads of suffering lye ahead,
More roads of suffering, is apparently something you must face
More pain to deal with
Back in a wheel chair
Acting like you don’t care
One day, you were on top of the world
And now, your just inches away from your lowest low
Now, come back to reality
And now I’d like to ask you something
Did you get a glimpse of what it is like to be me?
Do you now understand that its NOT fun and games.
But pain and suffering, which I don’t wish to endure
Yet, its something I have to put up with.
So when you see me smiling
Even when I’m at my lowest low
Don’t question why
But know its because I have faith in God,
That he’ll bring me through just fine.
I have yes times of sadness
And sure I have my why me days,
But at the end of the day,
I know in Gods hands
All will be okay.
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MissCin87
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2005-11-22 21:15:56]
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by sararose1950 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:31:52 PM AEST
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| Venting is good for the soul and allows others to feel with you and petition the creator on your behalf. Peace and Light and Blessings to you. |
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by slogan on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:40:58 PM AEST
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| A lot of info...good job...jh |
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:48:08 PM AEST
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| Alot of infor... Great Job |
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:25:21 PM AEST
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| Welocme to YPDC.WELCOME |
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:39:38 PM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here. A very heartfelt and touching write that brought tears to fill my eyes.
But know its because I have faith in God,
That he’ll bring me through just fine.
I have yes times of sadness
And sure I have my why me days,
But at the end of the day,
I know in Gods hands
All will be okay.
I wish u well and my heart and prayers go out to u. A very well detailed and expressed piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:18:47 AM AEST
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| Thanx for sharing, good luck, hope all goes well :) |
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Re: Put you're self in my place
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by coolbreeze17 on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:52:01 AM AEST
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| keep believeing and good luck |
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