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do you?
Contributed by
cherylleighh
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:09:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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do you ever think about me?
what do you think about?
do you ever miss me?
do you dare to say it out loud?
do you ever still want me?
would you ever act it out?
do you still love me?
would you ever tell me?
or are you just too proud
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cherylleighh
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2005-11-22 21:09:26]
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Re: do you?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:55:05 PM AEST
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| short but nice. |
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Re: do you?
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by CrystalTearsOfPain on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:09:26 PM AEST
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Short and to the point. Very good and full of feeling. When one puts questions in their poetry, it makes it alot easier to put yourself in the situation, and you did just that. It also shows good skill. Good job.
~*~They all stare, but they'll never see it's something inside of me~*~
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Re: do you?
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 03:35:29 AM AEST
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questions we all have, it was very well written, good job. i look forward to reading more of your writes,
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Re: do you?
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:12:57 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! I love it! |
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