|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Summer
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:47:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
|
Big trucks and dirt roads
sandy beaches and motor boats
tailgates and bottled beer
an open highway and crossing deer
horseback riding and sandy shoes
skinny dipping and a late night cruise
suntanning and water fights
equal memorable summer nights
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
... [
2005-11-22 20:47:35] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Summer
(User Rating: 1 ) by tears_of_blood on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:51:20 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good poem tasia its so right about our small town and the life we live haha good one.
brad |
|
|
Re: Summer
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinbaker62 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:58:15 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is almost idyllic..It sure sounds a beautiful place having such things associated with it..The things mentioned are all symbolic of (lost?) summer nights / days I guess.
Lovely poem.. |
|
|
Re: Summer
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnastasiaN on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 02:01:40 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well thanks to brilliant computers...my comment got cut off at the beginning of my poem. This poem was titled in contradiction to "Winter" as I was feeling the need for some happy thoughts. And this poem was written with last summer on my mind and my great friends that got me through my last year at home. I never thought so before but it's an awesome place to vacation and we do all those things on a regular basis. I can't wait to go back....ttfn! |
|
|
Re: Summer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:59:28 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
danger plus joy.. we were born happy, to see the world like you wrote it is the one who walks those summer nights of yesterday, follow into tomorrow, we hope to see this, which one can be thankful for.. blessed is the one who finds these joys yet exhibit safety , keep the lights down low for the deer.. ones.. all visible signs.. everything you wrote, warning.. live life and be safe. raquel leah |
|
|
|