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blindfolds
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 03:42:53 PM in AEST
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dance of the dead and the slaughter of the lamb
this is the way we all harvest the land
fornicating with nature splicing of genes
rebuilding the problems that man demeans
eye in the sky gps in our phones
they want to see where we all go
freedom and rights just pretty words
we all know how the truth is really heard
silenced by media and the powers up high
walking with blindfolds we try to get by
rythem of dread pounding my head
watching them walk all like the dead
blood signs and corporate crimes paving a way
to get ahead with out political dismay
call of the wild we all but betray
living in cells and repeating every day
these are just words but action speaks for itself
time to wake up and stop all your doubt
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lostrelic
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2005-11-22 15:42:53]
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Re: blindfolds
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 03:54:32 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece of poetry that rings the bells of truth. I love your style of writing Regan. You can always produce a captivating and mind provoking write. I throughly enjoy reading ur work.
like a rain drop i was born to fall
How true these words are. Keep up the great work.
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Re: blindfolds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:07:37 PM AEST
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this is right on the money and that's all i'll say about that, any more would dissilusion many people, u just wrote this poem, i knew this years ago i made the mistake of wanting 2 know the secret of life, unfortunately, i found
out, right on brother, great peice of writting . . .
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Re: blindfolds
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 07:07:16 PM AEST
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I like this. It's bold in it's brevity and that shows character. I like it. I like it a lot. Amazing write.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: blindfolds
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:03:48 PM AEST
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| Wow, u write yo poems wit feeling. Well chosen words too. I like this one. Good job! |
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