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~The world outside the heart~
Contributed by
TheDarkSamurai
on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:06:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The world outside the heart is a barren waste land,
There are no rules to obey only ideas to be acted upon
When the heart opens out, people are lead inside
The people experience a world within a world
Life is paradise, life is bliss,
Cause as soon as someone enters your heart,
There's nothing amiss, everything’s bliss.
Copyright ©
TheDarkSamurai
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2005-11-22 14:06:41]
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Re: ~The world outside the heart~
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:15:23 PM AEST
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| Nice poem!! |
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Re: ~The world outside the heart~
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by Dying_Angel on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:45:10 PM AEST
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| I'm not so sure. I like the style...but hmm. I don't agree that wehn someone enters the heart everythings wonderful. Personally I find it completely the opposite. It's usually full of pain and torment. But still. Good Poem. Bad Subject. Jenn xx |
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Re: ~The world outside the heart~
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:52:48 PM AEST
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| welcome to ypdc ... |
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Re: ~The world outside the heart~
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by sararose1950 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:17:07 PM AEST
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| letting yourself open to another is a risk- but not to open is to be forever cold- nice poem |
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