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Subliminal
Contributed by
desolated_denial
on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Sit behind the radio,
Static fills the air.
I don't hear it,
The sound comes from somewhere else.
White tiles carry me out,
to give you a ride again.
A pig on the ferris whell,
stick a coin in for another go.
We reached our destination,
another cross tinges the day
There are two different ways to go in.
I go one with you -
and one with him.
I think I stopped.
Not hesitation, but an "alerted pause."
For the first time, I doubted
and I can't even remember why.
I look down, too ashamed to look in the same direction you did.
The cream colored concrete stills my mind before another race.
You kept running so fast, I didn't think I could keep up.
The green bondage that kept you away from me -
and the cheap dye that never fades.
Just keep walking faster,
I'm too far behind now.
I'll sit in a corner until you forget.
Forget for a while until the next cross decides to burn.
It's bound to happen,
It always does.
You keep drinking all the water to put it out.
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2005-11-22 12:45:54]
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Re: Subliminal
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheDarkSamurai on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:11:20 PM AEST
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| very odd peom...its one that i would fine hard to explain and understand...very intriging tho...i do like it...it reminds me how life isn't all in order or rather how it isn't simple but complex |
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Re: Subliminal
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by dark_fighter_chick on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:35:35 PM AEST
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| that was.................odd, but i liked it. i didn't really get the point, but it was still great. i loved it. |
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