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THE DEVIL
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:19:34 AM in AEST
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The devil made me do it. the devil made me do it.
I didnt burn that house the devil made me do it.
The devil made me beat the old folks up.
Im sick and tired listening to the devil.
Maybe i should kill the devil.
Well there i go i just killed the devil.
The devil made me do it, the devil made me do it.
Wait the devils dead guess he didnt make me do it,
Guess i did it cause it was fun
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Re: THE DEVIL
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by Desolated_Denial on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:51:19 PM AEST
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| Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha! I liked it. Very simple message, and so universal. I like its simplicity and it's ending. [ I guess I did it 'cause it's fun ]. The only thing I can think of is to be a little more formal ... 'cause vs. because. But perhaps you did that to show the elasicity of the message. Good job! |
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Re: THE DEVIL
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:06:00 PM AEST
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With the repetition, it would make a decent song if it was expanded...The ending was good for a laugh, but this would be better if the content wasn't so slim. Keep up the writes!
Scorp. |
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Re: THE DEVIL
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:34:02 PM AEST
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nice poem! ... guess I did it cause it was fun.
This poem was kind of funny ... hahahaha |
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Re: THE DEVIL
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:57:37 PM AEST
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| realy a good write. what kind of stuff have you been having cencored |
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Re: THE DEVIL
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by Kamal on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:42:00 AM AEST
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Well put I think the devil is full of you know what....
Lets kill the devillll... |
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