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The Two
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WAE
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:00:11 AM in AEST
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I saw an old pine
That silently had broken
Its way to freedom,
Its way light and life,
Throughout the cold mass
Of a granite rock.
Now, it was falling slowly
Into the abyss.
All had been in vain.
I met an old man,
Who had been a hero,
Giving everything of him away,
Without even thinking of reward.
Now he was dying,
Alone and helpless,
Betrayed by everyone
Even by himself.
All had been in vain.
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WAE
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Re: The Two
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by amatt on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:06:20 AM AEST
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Re: The Two
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 07:55:43 PM AEST
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Ah so beautiful - and sad!
Don't we all go through betrayals?
Yet, - nothing is "in vain", just serves a purpose we do not understand as yet tesoro mio.
Schoenes Danksagungsfast
Elizabeth
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