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HOW I SEE IT
Contributed by
joe
on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 09:30:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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MY HEART HAS SO MUCH TO SAY
BUT IT'S ALWAYS THE SAME
THE SAME STORIES AND FEELINGS
I'VE TRIED SO HARD TO FORGET IN VAIN
MAYBE EACH TEAR IS A MEMORY FADING AWAY
ATLEAST THAT'S WHAT I TELL MYSELF
WHEN I LOSE AGAINST THE PAIN
HAVE YOU SUCCEEDED IN RIDDING ME
FROM BEHIND YOUR EYES
OR ARE YOU STRONGER THAN ME
AND CAN IGNORE YOUR HEARTS CRY
BUT FOR ME I'M WEAK
AND I TRY NOT TO THINK
I CAN'T TAKE YOUR FACE RIGHT NOW
THE SAME THATS BEEN HAUNTING
AND KILLING THE SOUND
OF ANYTHING ELSE THAT
SHOULD BE ECHOING INSIDE
TELLING ME TO LET GO
THAT YOU'LL NEVER BE MINE
BUT THROUGH FEELINGS OF SAME
EMOTIONS UNWANTED
A SENSE OF BELIEF
OF LONGING AND LOSS
THAT MAYBE THERE'S SOMETHING
A CHANCE AND PURPOSE...
JUST FOR US
Copyright ©
joe
... [
2005-11-21 21:30:18]
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Re: HOW I SEE IT
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:08:57 PM AEST
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| Great job, very emotional. |
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Re: HOW I SEE IT
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by BEBE on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:16:47 PM AEST
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so emotional.. but good job
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Re: HOW I SEE IT
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:28:15 AM AEST
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| Great JOB... very emotional |
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Re: HOW I SEE IT
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:13:33 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! I love it! |
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