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Fighter-Love
Contributed by
fionndruinne
on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:30:03 PM in AEST
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You need the reflexes
of a fighter
for this love.
I see too many screaming blades.
This is still bardsong,
champion-chant,
but your steps circle the void.
Keep away from the pit,
yawning darkness,
growing fear.
Heed the light.
Maker-love
hangs on to you
fierce faces about
stab the darkness.
This is not something
that you know -
it's beyond understanding.
So call lightning
on the foes like fields of wheat,
and they will fade
while you do not.
Not yet.
© MMV ADL
Copyright ©
fionndruinne
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2005-11-21 20:30:03]
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Lancaster on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:38:57 PM AEST
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very cool stuff
i liked it alot |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:52:34 PM AEST
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Andrew, you are very special, I hope you know that.
This poem is special as well, and also, I found it rather inspiring, myself.
Jarred is right, this poem is gorgeous, and is also one of my faves.
Awesome write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 09:01:08 PM AEST
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A piece of brilliance to ward off the dark.
I think very highly of this, Andrew. Whatever has inspired it is blessed and you have passed it on to readers.
I see circles of protection, sir knight.
Blessings, J. |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by brew on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:46:04 PM AEST
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The write, was very maticulous.......A fighter..........a winner, yet not to boast.! Wonderful.! All should read, and take in.
Brew~ |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:58:55 AM AEST
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My!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is simply glorious, Andrew! Geez... I'm so perfectly, fabulously blown over by this that I can't even tell you the enumerable reasons that I adore it - and there are so very many reasons. My goodness --- you've split the night wide open! And Andrew.... I swear I heard the exhale.
Wow.
~Snemmy
(who is very selective in her wow'ing)
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 04:37:19 AM AEST
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| I LIKE IT ALOT...COOL!!! |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:18:30 AM AEST
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Dear God I don't think anyone could steal your candle for a while Andrew. This is just beautiful it's gorgeous, I know its such a passé to use that word but it really is gorgeous.
You certainly have raised the poetic bar into new heights and it’ll be fun to see who can beat you to it.
Happy writing
Jane~ |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:41:32 PM AEST
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Very well expressed here Andrew...The path of darkness is the easiest to follow, yet the path of light reaps the most rewards...Well told!
Scorp. |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 03:31:46 PM AEST
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| Wheat is gentle.. rain can destroy it.. lightening can burn it... you are a fighter andrew.. you have much love to share, bless you for this wise poem, may the Lord be with you forever... Raquel Leah |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by robertdavidson on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 04:33:01 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written. Love is often more of a duel than a duet. A fight for supremacy and dominance within a relationship. You use very evocative and carefully thought out words and images.
Robert Davidson. |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 08:53:01 PM AEST
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Awesome as usual Andrew. I love the last stanza!
I believe you are right. It is SO life!
Sometimes your writes evoke eternal thought and
emotion from me ... and this is no exception.
Splendiferous work, dear friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 04:59:07 PM AEST
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A valient tale indeed!!!
Life? Yes I think i see that, but I feel more...perhaps bigger than life? |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by slogan on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:08:32 PM AEST
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| great piece of poetry...jh |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 05:18:57 PM AEST
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Mo Charid! This is... so damn eloquent it made me shiver. You've stepped so far beyond where you were and it's glorious! Aye, a Ghra, call lightning and keep the faith.
The terrible dawn |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:28:20 PM AEST
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A very awesome poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Fighter-Love
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 07:26:17 PM AEST
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fantastic 1st scene..
very enticing final stanza..
off to read pt. 2
B
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