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Look
Contributed by
tacit_pain
on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Look in my eyes
What do you see?
A little soul?
Longing to be free?
Look at my arms
Do you see them now?
Here I am told
That the scars are so foul
Look at my mouth
What is it saying?
"Please help me"
"My life is decaying"
Look at my hands
What are they doing?
They are cutting me up
But no one they are fooling
Look at my tears
Where did they infest
This is my last word
For this is my death
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2005-11-21 19:54:10]
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Re: Look
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:17:09 AM AEST
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wow.this is so powerful. i hope you dont feel this way, if so please try and be strong.
beautiful writing.
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: Look
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by mindless-wish on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:19:24 AM AEST
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hey
awesome poem it told me alot. i know its not easy but you'll get through this.
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Re: Look
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:34:04 AM AEST
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hey awsome poem! I am sorry you're going
threw this.. I know how you feel I suffer from
depression,, and it has it's up's and downs.
thanks for sharing it,,, and if you're feeling like
this ... I hope you get better. |
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Re: Look
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by fake_emptyness on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 07:45:13 PM AEST
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| i like this one. only because i know how to (look) at you....i know what (I) see. |
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