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walk of loneliness
Contributed by
packatack
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:45:22 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Strollin down the street cuz nobody answered my door
Felt like everybody was havin fun watching the Phoenix Sun's galore
I looked up at the window and all heads turned away from me
Watched the blinds close slowly so I went on my way
Tried to cry but tears froze my eyelids now I can't see
Last of my loved ones getting shut away from me
Walked far as the bus stop and sat down
Hoping a person would come walking along
Couple hours later barely got up to walk somewhere else
And now I begin to take another step of the loneliness path
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Re: walk of loneliness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:48:54 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem, i've often felt like this, like i'm totaly alone even though I know people care about me, i've also felt as if everyone hated me and I was totally alone, as I walk an endless white line. I loved the poem. *Rose* |
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Re: walk of loneliness
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by dark_fighter_chick on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:30:36 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to the word in this poem. I feel alone lik that at times. This write was really nice. |
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Re: walk of loneliness
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:51:23 PM AEST
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ohhhh boy does this strike a nerve. That is the worst feeling to have. Nicely done.
We can start a lonliness club right here at ypdc!!
Michelle |
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Re: walk of loneliness
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 03:34:55 PM AEST
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well done!!
thanks for sharing it.. |
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Re: walk of loneliness
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:54:58 AM AEST
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aaaaahhhhh yes,
we all have these feelings many times but we're never alone.
huggs,
emy |
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