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someday ....
Contributed by
jheng
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:27:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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you seduce me with your smile,
& i fell in love with your charm,
you mersmerize me with your eyes,
& drown me in your arms.
but im afraid to tell you
of what i truly feel,
i fear that you might
reject the love i feel.
i love you,
so what should i do?
am i suppose
to tell it to you?
or just keep it to myself,
never let you know,
& just hope that someday,
you'll love me too?
Copyright ©
jheng
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2005-11-21 18:27:52]
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Re: someday ....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:41:41 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I liked how you expressed feelings in so little words, I liked the words you chose through out the poem as well. My advice is that the person you have feelings for will find out soon enough. Sometimes when you resist telling your feelings to someone, your feelings just get stronger for that person, and the stronger they get, the more they want to come out, someday when you see that person, they will come out, whether you want to or not, sometimes your own mind, your own body decides when it is the right time. Good luck. SLipSiX. |
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Re: someday ....
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by Whisper on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:01:51 PM AEST
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:-) Nice write Thanks for sharing.
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Re: someday ....
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by brew on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:04:59 PM AEST
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Do tell..........because you are damned if you dont.and damed if you do....so.......try it.! If you dont you'll kick yourself in the hiney...and if do..........well .....cant answer that, only they can.! Cross fingers........and if its going to be returned , ....wonderful>! They know if they love you.......but you muct be"in love" to return all back.!
Good luck
Brew~ |
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