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Loves Confliction
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 03:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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One more time, please smile for me.
One more time, love sets us free.
One more time, my heart beats for you.
One last time, loves confliction.
Another arguement full of love,
that heaven sends to us from above.
The flickering candles lit, loves conflict.
Why do lovers always die,
often before the last goodbye.
Lifes always full of dispair,
but now I guess you just dont care.
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2005-11-21 15:41:36]
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Re: Loves Confliction
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:42:09 PM AEST
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| love hurts when alive and when we pass away. the main thing is that the memories go on forever... nice write |
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Re: Loves Confliction
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:58:46 PM AEST
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| Love does hurt, but better to live having loved and been loved than not to have had love at all. Great Write. |
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Re: Loves Confliction
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:14:48 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! I love it! |
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Re: Loves Confliction
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by CaseyRedman on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 02:24:55 PM AEST
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| good peom but maybe you could work on rhyme scheme and concistency. i like the simplicity. i read some poems that sound great but i dont realy know what their about keep it simple |
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