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I can only handle so much
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 03:04:51 PM in AEST
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I'm not writing about love this time
It's just something that's not on my mind
So many factors that bind us out there
I've come to the point that I really don't care
I can only handle so much
Especially when I'm lazy
And labled as such
But now when I'm so close
To having some peace
There's so much in my way
That I lost my place in this world
I feel I can't go on
I want so much
But ask for so little
My life is finally getting hard
Because I've coasted thus far
And accomplished so little
(I'm not up to par)
So please just wake me up when November ends
So I can wake up in December
And start to live again
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Re: I can only handle so much
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by vampyrekiss on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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| i like it kinda different and it flows in a different kinda way |
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Re: I can only handle so much
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:46:51 PM AEST
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love hurts us in so many ways and when we get hurt we feel like closing the door to everything and waiting for all the hurts to go away thus as you stated in your poem...
So please just wake me up when November ends
So I can wake up in December
And start to live again
once we feel the hurt is gone then we feel it is time to wake up and live again... remember one very important thing always remain true to yourself.... great write |
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Re: I can only handle so much
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by Lancaster on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:40:27 PM AEST
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december wont make it any better
gotta start now
nice write |
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Re: I can only handle so much
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by CaseyRedman on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 02:22:47 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: I can only handle so much
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:34:33 AM AEST
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nice poem
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