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Time & Tide
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:30:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Days, minutes, seconds, hours,
Bloom and die like all the flowers
Colourful blossoms, their heady scent,
Gone, and no one knows what’s meant
Years drift by like ponderous clouds,
Carrying us to our death shrouds
Across the skies of every life,
Storms and sweet days, calm and strife
Time and tide and all things pass,
Like grains of sand through the hour glass
What is squandered and what’s well spent,
When no one knows just what is meant?
Lets swim the waters of the seas,
Doing what we mostly please
Or rise and fall just like the flowers,
Crying for all of those lost hours.
Copyright ©
spike
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2005-11-21 06:30:55]
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Re: Time & Tide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:45:47 PM AEST
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| All I may say is beautiful. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Time & Tide
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:03:55 PM AEST
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| Amazing write, i don't know why but this seems to fit my thoughts right now especially the first stanza. Great job. |
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Re: Time & Tide
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:44:30 PM AEST
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I love your writes. You are an incredibly gifted and talented poet. A sensational write that captivates the reader from start to finish. Remarkable as always. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
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Re: Time & Tide
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 02:13:40 PM AEST
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i am very glad that you commented on mine, and that i was smart enough to do the same. your work is beautiful, and you are indeed very gifted and talented.
~Ash |
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Re: Time & Tide
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 12:45:57 PM AEST
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My wife was reading over my shoulder. "Ooooh, quite good" was her comment. Mine: SUPERB. Dang yer good.
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Re: Time & Tide
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 12:53:41 PM AEST
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Excellent write....especially loved the third verse..
Jenni |
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