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In the end
Contributed by
mindless-wish
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 02:27:26 AM in AEST
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a single tear glides down my face
the stunning sensation of my pain
thinking of you the times i waste
you played me like you played a game
dont want to hide dont want to run
i only thought you were my one
all the things inside my head
all the times wish i was dead
never again, never no more
can not be us my skin you've torn
gleeming shinning my bestest friend
all will come and all will end
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Re: In the end
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by jmpy84 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 02:33:33 AM AEST
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| well written you can feel this one |
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Re: In the end
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by classicfailedhero on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:07:58 AM AEST
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| pretty good, i envy your rythem |
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Re: In the end
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:41:05 AM AEST
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| How said...=C I like it, though. The rhythm is nice. |
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Re: In the end
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:12:50 PM AEST
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| Sad poem, but I loved it, words came together perfectly, along with the reading. I understand how you feel, I was once played like you. *Rose* |
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