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Beaches of Suicide
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:37:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have wandered the beaches of suicide
I have waded into the waters
And felt the pain that my death would cause
Felt the stinging loneliness
That leaves wounds deep inside
I have held onto the lies
In the hope they would bring me peace
And now...
Bleeding crimson death
I stare into the hollow eyes
Of those that walk this path,
But they offer no help
Only an empty hand
To guide me to my demise
With swollen eyes I murder myself
Please realize this was my only option
I fought and tried for so long
And I am weak with exhaustion
I kneel in these sands
Raise my head towards heaven
As I wait for the blood loss and pills to take effect
There was no other way...
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
... [
2005-11-21 00:37:22]
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:58:08 AM AEST
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You know I could be jumping the gun a little here Joel, but I really hope ure not thinking of doing this. It'd be a tragic waste of such a valuable and very dear life. I suffer from depression and I know all the downfalls of it inside out. You have so much going for you. You're a very talented, gifted and very special poet. Chin up my friend and may ur days ahead be bright and blest.
*heart hugs 4 you*
~sue~ |
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:06:30 AM AEST
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Gosh Joel, this was just too sad. It just makes you want to help out and to ease thier pain.
This was really good Joel especialy the first stanza.
Jane~
(Who needs a lot of tissues) |
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:15:20 AM AEST
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| wow this was so sad |
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by waos on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 09:51:39 AM AEST
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Well you had already shown me this one, I just thought I'd
leave something here for you to read another time. Especially
since my native studies class was cancelled but most of us
didn't know until we were already there anyway.
Awesome poem Joel. You know what I think already.
~Kara |
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 03:56:53 PM AEST
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| Nice poem |
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:03:21 PM AEST
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| Wow this was a very good poem, I loved it. I can relate to it as well, i've often felt like this, only it felt like my heart was hollow and the feelings that I should've felt weren't there, it was terrible. *Rose* |
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by Cancer on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 12:20:47 AM AEST
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sometimes there is no other way. and anyone who tells you otherwise is full of *****. the scrawl itself is quite nice with it's imagery, but i like the imagery the title itself contains. skittles and stars and what not.
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Re: Beaches of Suicide
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by Broken-Suicide on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 10:47:53 PM AEST
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Nice. You put it together so well
You need to keep writing. You havent posted in a while |
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