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Love
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:22:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I love you with all my heart.
You look like a dove.
It's almost like you can fit into a glove.
There Is days when I miss you.
I wished I could shove you into a glove.
SO I wouldnt have to miss you as much.
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butterflygirl40
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2005-11-21 00:22:54]
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Re: Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:43:55 AM AEST
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A cute little write. a good attempt, like you said it is a little short. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Love
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:53:44 AM AEST
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I know that when I get people to read my
poems ... They dont comment me on my poems.when I read people's poems I always
comment them on their poems,, so can you plz
be nice and comment me on my poems!! ^_^
let me know how you like this poem. It would be nice:)
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Re: Love
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by jmpy84 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 02:49:31 AM AEST
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| short and cute keep it up |
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:48:47 AM AEST
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how ever long the writting it's the thought and
sincerity of the heart that r indicutive of one validity, lovely sentiment u have presented here.
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Re: Love
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by gah_veh on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:40:20 PM AEST
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| short and very sweet |
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Re: Love
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by Sinned on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 06:13:05 AM AEST
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Butterflygirl40
This is cute short and sweet.A poem needent be long.A few words can say alot. I believe you can do much better tho.Please keep posting as I enjoy your poems.
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