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His Vanity's Amazing...
Contributed by
markymark
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:09:18 AM in AEST
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He watched himself ...as he passed on by
a real quick glance...devilishly sly
adjusted collar...brushed his shirt
wiped away a spot of dirt
his vanity's amazing...
brushed back hair, not out of place
over gelled, just past his face
his plastic tan, was a big disgrace
his vanity's amazing...
gold watch on a fake gold chain
a massive ego from a tiny brain
he just aint Able...nor even kane
his vanity's amazing...
cowboy boots...with a silver toe
with heels that high
he's got vertigo
after shave
that leaves an after glow
his vanity's amazing...
slim cigars to look so cool
a silver lighter
to light the fool
how the hell...did he get through school
his vanity's amazing...
MDM...24/07/02...
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Re: His Vanity's Amazing...
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by PS_iloveyou on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:59:22 AM AEST
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| Well done....and yes it takes all sorts to make the world go round.Good write |
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Re: His Vanity's Amazing...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 12:59:06 PM AEST
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Nice and interesting, Mark....
Jenni |
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Re: His Vanity's Amazing...
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by Mud on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 01:56:36 PM AEST
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| "a massive ego and a tiny brain" - love it, love it, love it! |
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Re: His Vanity's Amazing...
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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Excellent Mark...I can just picture him ...I like this a lot...
Love Chrissie xx |
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Re: His Vanity's Amazing...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 11:55:35 AM AEST
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| Great poem! I agree with that other person... "a massive ego from a tiny brain" is the best line! |
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Re: His Vanity's Amazing...
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by Holly on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 08:36:37 AM AEST
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Must have been a weird school indeed to have allowed this character to survive!! I enjoyed this Mark.
Holly |
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