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Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 06:00:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Thoughts of whispers
Whispers of the most lovelist of words
Given to one, and No other
With the words that are presented to ONLY you
Brings a feeling which no other could ever image
A individual feeling
Safe and strong feeling
Alas, its only a whisper.......
A faint silence, that has been long for
Eternity
With this, I leave all in thought
whisper........those words!
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brew
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Re: Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 07:04:43 PM AEST
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Very interesting. Good Job
Bebe |
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Re: Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:24:57 AM AEST
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Lovely thought brew and definately most
sincere in it's quest not 2 mention a most provacitive one at that, splendid peice of writting as usual, true 2 form as always.
(((((brew)))))))
Ben |
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Re: Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
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by Lancaster on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:46:06 PM AEST
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| I had never thought of a whisper, and what it was, you make some very real points, nice job here |
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Re: Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:30:15 AM AEST
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Not too sure what is abstract about it but it certainly is a beautiful write. Indeed beautiful sentiment here.
Yep, have definitely regretted saying those three little words but we must take chances in life and well, just go for it.
Truly a beautiful write and thought provoking.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:00:50 PM AEST
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Ahhh yes! The 3 words that can either be the most beautiful, OR instant death...*sigh* You are right though...no one should be afraid of expressing those three little words. You gave us some food for thought, as per usual Dayna! Keep it up!
Scorp: ) |
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Re: Whispers in ones hopeless Mind
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 08:14:03 PM AEST
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This so fasinating Brew. "A Whisper in the night........can be heard louder than real words. My husband used to read all the time. And the kids and I would be taking away, and then we discovered if we stopped talking and started whispering he would look up immediately!!! We did it just for fun from then on!
What a thoughtprovoking poem Brew.
and you did leave me in thought........thanks for the nice memory!
Warm love
consue
And thanking you always Brew for all you nice comments! |
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