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Someone To Care
Contributed by
Skye
on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 02:55:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She’s lost,
The girl
Who’s walking
The lonely road
Once, she had a family
On the outside,
They appeared warm and loving
But unseen, they were abusive and cruel
No one cared enough
To look a little closer
Look a little deeper
To help her
So she left
And now she’s
Lost and alone
Walking a lonely road
And still now, no one
Cares about her,
No one looks
At her
She will take
Her life now
Then will
Somebody care?
Hours later, they find her body
Poor girl, they say
Can’t be over 18
She just wanted
Someone to care
Copyright ©
Skye
... [
2005-11-20 14:55:04]
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Re: Someone To Care
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 02:59:46 PM AEST
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Thats very sad that a young girl would take her own life. Very nice write
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Re: Someone To Care
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:15:27 PM AEST
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im sorry to hear about you friend...its too young to die..stay strong and dont go down that path!
hope
Jenni
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Re: Someone To Care
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:53:59 PM AEST
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oh my god, that is sooo sad!! i'm sorry to hear about your friend. i just wish she would've went to a friend or someone for her life. that's so sad to here about that, i hope you are staying away from that lonely road.
it was a good write, except for what it says, it was good though. keep up the good work!!
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