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Finding a reason why
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
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Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 05:32:58 AM in AEST
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The tears are falling heavIly
Lies are spilling quickly, everyone's changing and I am standing alone
Days are passing by : seconds to minutes : minutes to hours : hours to days : days to life : life to death
The blade is cutting deeper
Blood is flowing out rapidly, the body is going numb while thoughts run wild
we are struggling, fighting to live, living to die, but we still have no idea why
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Re: Finding a reason why
(User Rating: 1 ) by rinx on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 12:26:14 PM AEST (User
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wow. This poem is really moving, it encaptures the stillness that you feel in devastation, and the pain when your distraught.... so sad, so painful, so beautiful. |
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Re: Finding a reason why
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadclown on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 03:11:26 PM AEST (User
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thought I'd check out your poems cos I noticed your username as I was lookin through the listings. Love the name. Excellent poem |
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