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wonderful time of the year
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:57:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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winter is soon to come near
wonderful flakes of white snow falling dear
getting colder and colder each day and year
its so beautifully white with in every sight
underneath the crisp blanket
watching my grandma putting up the christmas lights
it brings me such delight
christmas gifts bring so much joy and laughs
do not allow love and happiness to collapse
a perfect time for familys to come togeither
shareing love and happiness since forever
for this is the time to express how you feel
to the one you love and care for real
i love this time of the year
i cant be leave it ends in one simple day
hopeing it will continue the same exact way
i pray and pray this isnt the last day...
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2005-11-19 22:57:27]
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Re: wonderful time of the year
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 07:21:54 AM AEST
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| i love it thanks for posting such a positive poem in spite of all of the darkness that is often written about most of the time. i love christmas and your poem totally put me in a good mood! |
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Re: wonderful time of the year
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:33:51 AM AEST
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Dear Jennifer, I love your poetry, it's so real and geniune.........I like your descriptive words like the crispy blanket for the snow. You have much talent dear, and I'm so glad you have joined us here.........at YPDC.
Thanking you again for all your lovely comments on my poems.
Warm love
consue |
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Re: wonderful time of the year
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:43:23 AM AEST
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I really like this poem Jennifer.
awsome |
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