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My Little Suicide
Contributed by
de5tructo
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Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:16:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A love that echoes with pain.
My struggle will endure.
It's sickening just to breathe.
My final solution is impure.
I don't want your pity.
Yet still you let it show.
It just feeds my motivation.
For my blood to flow.
Thinking of those last words.
Everyday slows down to a pulse.
So my insanity sets in.
And I react with impulse.
I cut my inhibitions.
With a single downward stroke.
All my past sorrows fade.
And my heart's no longer broke.
Copyright ©
de5tructo
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2005-11-19 19:16:20]
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Re: My Little Suicide
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by trini on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 08:06:04 PM AEST
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very nice write. it's one of the better cutter poems. keep up the good work.
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Re: My Little Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:54:58 PM AEST
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| one of the more different poems ive read, since it does not include the emo qualities that are usually incorporated into such a topic. i loved the poem. excellent use of rhymes, flow, and concept. i think the simplicity or wording worked for this poem, because it gave it more power, and yet wasnt simple in itself. |
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Re: My Little Suicide
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 04:30:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem.. enjoyed it alot |
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Re: My Little Suicide
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 05:45:33 PM AEST
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i know that feeling all too well, it seemed to
have a hidden feeling to it though, never
revealing itself, never appearing not to. well done
diz |
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Re: My Little Suicide
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by Wolf-Isa on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 05:17:19 PM AEST
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| Brava. |
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