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Ligthyears away
Contributed by
Gunda
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Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The smell of you surrounds me,
But yet you aren’t here with me
The centimeters between us
Feels like lightyears to me
‘Cause you are here
But not to hold me
I can’t be close to you
But if I close my eyes
I feel your hands holding me tight
I feel your skin next to mine
I open my eyes
And you are still lightyears away
Copyright ©
Gunda
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2005-11-19 19:01:54]
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Re: Ligthyears away
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by trini on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:05:25 PM AEST
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ah my god. i know exactly what your feeling. so horrible, but still it makes an awesome write. keep up the good work.
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Re: Ligthyears away
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by jyssvw22 on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 08:44:24 PM AEST
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this is a nice way to describe a not so nice feeling. you wrote it well,
good work |
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Re: Ligthyears away
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by Skye on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:05:16 PM AEST
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| i know how you feel. this is a really great poem. |
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